I love to look at roses
The blood-red ones the best.
They caress at my fingers
And stand out from the rest.
The yellow ones much brighter
Than the soothing whites.
As poignancies incarnate
Play succor to dull nights.
My gaze remains enraptured
My mind assail all gloom
When I treat my senses
To blood-reds in the bloom.
Some give in to romance
To few it just unveils
Some tender mysteries hidden.
To me, “It’s Something Else”.
Its fragrance makes for Heaven
Fills my half-drunk mind
Of all that was born lovely
Its name I cannot find.
Its shade a red of passion,
A Carmine left undone.
At places a deep scarlet
Left baking in the Sun.
With invite in each petal
And intrigue in its breast
Too lazy to awaken
Too frail to be at rest.
I know not if its earthy
Or Angels in exile.
I only feel a timid joy
When ‘Roses’ make her smile.
14 comments:
Quite a nice poem...i am sure the roses would smell sweeter after reading this poem....good job !!!
heady.
beautiful...
nice!!:)
beautiful... i can see it even though im not a rose fan :)...
loved the rhymings, very unconscious and with the flow
But methinks I have chanced upon a rare poet! It's very lovely.Very.
i second ahona...great poignant poetry mate...kudos!!!
Thats SO sweet!!
I used to love roses.. but that was before they started coming out with the artificially perfumed freaks of nature :|
ur poetry makes roses look even prettier now... made a good read :)
made for a good read **
i second that too!!!
errgghh... you make my heart ache.
"I know not if its earthy
Or Angels in exile.
I only feel a timid joy
When ‘Roses’ make her smile."
I love roses.... beyond anything else :-)
That made me fall in love with roses...
all over again!!
# rahul- That's some compliment! Thankz.
# antigone - dhonnobaad
# miss namesake- thankz.
# madhuri - Not a rose fan? why ? :O
p.s- Me no fan either!:P
# V.S - I love rhymes. and thank u!
# ahona - You might have just jumped the gun, Oh benevolent reader. :)
me Glad ( note the G in block) anyway.
# c.n - poignant ? where ? I thought I wrote a sunny one!
# mac - 'artificially perfumed freaks'???? where ?
Thanks anywayz ( goes without saying i.e ) :)
# psychedelic - You make me feel proud.
# namesake - thankz once more. :)
# raajii- It seems I will have to really really wait for one 'critique' from you. You plan to inflate my ego beyond repair. :)
# B n B - I take it as my tip. :)
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