Hold my hands
Come to me
Sing to me in trance
While candle burns
In thinning light
And magic does its dance
Drown a while
Breathe for life
And see death face to face
Murder me
If eyes could kill
But stay in my embrace.
The violin strings
That filters pain
Tear them down with glee
Wail with pain
Smile that smile
You often smiled at me.
The breeze is strong
The limbs are weak
A dizzy numbness leads
To hollow roads
And empty hearts
The passion in us pleads
A lilt in steps
Hair askew
Kohl smudged in your eyes
In cold of night
We warm our hearts
Make love midst lurking lies.
7 comments:
What I love most about your poems is that they are simple and straight-forward. No unnecessary adjectives. No flowery words. Just a story that makes its way through effortlessly rhyming lines. Clap clap.
your excellent-as-usual wordplay reminds me of the u2 song 'hold me thrill me kiss me kill me' :)
Whew! guilty pleasures! I loved this line "Make love midst lurking lies". Darkly true.
Drown a while
Breathe for life...
vicarious pleasure for the reader subdued to silence by some expressions here.
# P.C - Thakuu thakuuuu !!!
# N.A- suntey hobe etaa. :)
# Mac - coupe de grace ...again! :P
# antigone - boddo kothin kotha.... bujlum na!
oh my gosh, i absolutely love it
'Murder me
If eyes could kill
But stay in my embrace."
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We warm our hearts
make love midst lurking lies...
Absolutely brilliant!!!
# raajii- And how I love ur comments . :)
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